I think it looks great. Veggie55 certainly made it look as if it came straight out of the show.
It's based off of a story that I'm co-authoring with on FIMfiction, The Sour Grapes Chronicles www.fimfiction.net/story/7109/…
The focus is on the life of the Vineyard owner Sour Grapes and how her life often runs parallel to the more famous goings-on in Ponyville.
Stormfront is one of her farmhooves, and part-times as a member of the Royal Equestrian Rogue Storm Team, AKA the Storm-Riders.
He was born with an exceptionally large wingspan which made him clumsy and an object of ridicule as a foal, but now that he's an adult gives him the necessary 'equipment' to buck weather systems like Tornadoes and Cyclones.
Part of learning how to move with wings that large came from his mom making him take Aero-dance lessons as a colt. In this picture he's showing his employer that he can certainly cut a rug with the best of them, and she's showing him that she's more than capable of keeping up.